Friday, September 25, 2009

Love Song..

Lazy felt the sky,
Just like the last drop of sun from my eyes.
I stood my ground as,
Skepticism seduced me to the level of insanity.
Love,Pain,Hate, Joy, Blood, Sweat, Tear
All were newly discovered along
with the ignorance that I liked,
Once upon a time.
Long back I felt.
Long back I died.
I couldn't live to say that flesh was warm ONCE.
I stood my ground as,
I let you go.
Stay well.
Stay far.

3 comments:

Subho Sen Sharma said...

:P
a different love song!!
\m/

Unknown said...

wow.. awesome stuff.. your really good at it.. keep it coming..

Unknown said...

Very very good. Short but deep... I loved the concept and the ending part...Very original as well....

To be a critic:
Better choice of words in 2nd line and 4th line to express the pain...

Stay well,
Stay Far!
\m/